Wednesday 2
WRITING
Total 11/20
Content 2 Communicative Achievement 3
Organisation 3 Language 3
(+) Sentence construction was good in general.
(-) Too short. Didn’t give yourself the chance to develop ideas.
Keep the introduction general. Don’t include specific examples.
You didn’t write about rivers and seas in detail.
Try to use language for contrast: although, even though
WRITING
Total 16/20
Content 4 Communicative Achievement 5
Organisation 3 Language 4
(+) Excellent writing style means it’s easy to read.
Very good range of vocabulary.
(-) Use paragraphs to show separation of ideas.
Try to use language for contrast: although, even though
Minor spelling mistakes but they didn’t affect understanding
READING
Grade B1. Score 17/42
143 Cambridge English Scale.
B2 is 24/42.
USE OF ENGLISH
Grade –. Score 8/28
127 Cambridge English Scale.
B1 is 11/28. B2 is 18/28.
WRITING
Total 14/20
Content 4 Communicative Achievement 4
Organisation 3 Language 3
(+) Excellent sentence construction.
(-) Keep the introduction general. Don’t include specific examples.
Use paragraphs to show separation of ideas.
Try to use language for contrast: although, even though
Minor spelling mistakes but they didn’t affect understanding.
Subject/verb agreement
READING
Grade B2. Score 27/42
165 Cambridge English Scale
USE OF ENGLISH
Grade B1. Score 16/28
154 Cambridge English Scale.
B2 is 18/28.
WRITING
Absent.
Absent.
READING
Grade B1. Score 16/42
140 Cambridge English Scale.
B2 is 24/42.
USE OF ENGLISH
Grade B1. Score 12/28
143 Cambridge English Scale.
B2 is 18/28.
WRITING
Total 14/20
Content 4 Communicative Achievement 4
Organisation 3 Language 3
(+) Good organisation.
(-) Keep the introduction general. Don’t include specific examples.
Use synonyms instead of repeating words.
Try to use language for contrast: although, even though
Try to link your paragraphs.
Use linking words. However, in addition, furthermore.
READING
Grade B2. Score 26/42
163 Cambridge English Scale
USE OF ENGLISH
Grade B1. Score 14/28
149 Cambridge English Scale.
B2 is 18/28.
WRITING
Total 13/20
Content 3 Communicative Achievement 4
Organisation 3 Language 3
(+) Good writing style.
(-) Needs more specific vocabulary.
Try to use language for contrast: although, even though
Use linking words. However, in addition, furthermore.
Total 9/20
Content 3 Communicative Achievement 2
Organisation 2 Language 2
(+) You used paragraphs, but there was not enough content.
(-) Need to expand the ideas.
Use more specific vocabulary.
Try to use language for contrast: although, even though
READING
Grade C1. Score 37/42
180 Cambridge English Scale
USE OF ENGLISH
Grade B2. Score 22/28
173 Cambridge English Scale
WRITING
Absent.